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Petra's avatar

What a remarkable poem. The repetition creates a hypnotic rhythm. I love how the doll becomes a thread connecting memory, imagination, childhood, friendship, and identity, all while remaining wonderfully itself. <3

John Edward Keough's avatar

This is a great note!

Petra's avatar

My pleasure <3

Nora O’Dowd's avatar

Love the repetition leading back to the doll. Wonderful!

John Edward Keough's avatar

It was fun to write. Thank you for checking it out!

Ray Sweatman's avatar

Fabulous!