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Bill Shaner's avatar

"the colorful villains always escape" good ass line right there

John Edward Keough's avatar

Thanks brother.

Hidden Resilience's avatar

So beautifully and cleverly written…heartbreakingly so! 👌💛

John Edward Keough's avatar

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. I am grateful.

Manuel Alvarado's avatar

I'm Batman(uel) and I will never let you fall. 💪🏽❤️

John Edward Keough's avatar

Thank you brother!

Elizabeth's avatar

It hurts my heart, but in a good way.

John Edward Keough's avatar

Im grateful, not that your heart hurts, but that it is good.

Petra's avatar

Powerful, with a pull of sharp imagery and emotional force that builds and lingers. <3

John Edward Keough's avatar

Thank you for taking the time to read it. Feedback makes me want to write more, and all of your encouragement is making me a machine!

Petra's avatar

That’s an awesome comment to my comment. :) <3

John Edward Keough's avatar

I think encouragement can be infective. Person to person, group to group.

Petra's avatar

I agree <3

Ray Sweatman's avatar

Just love this rambling yet wonderfully coherence

John Edward Keough's avatar

Rambling Coherence might be the title for my book now. I will dutifully give you credit in the preamble!